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All It Takes

One touch
One look;
One smile
One comment;
Is all it takes.

One hope
One time;
One call
One laugh;
Is all it takes.

One day
One moment;
One life
One love;
Is all it takes.

One drink
One car;
One accident
One tear;
Is all it takes,
   To loose yourself.
©2007-2010 ~One-Regret-103
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Author's Comments

I dunno.

I was bored, and I felt like writing poetry. And I HATE writing poetry. Odd, yes. Bored, yes. Steal, no.

Actuall I wrote it for an inspiration I just had for a picture, and this was just quicker. :)

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:iconleviathan57:
lol, No problem. I try not to just fav a poem that I like. I try to put in as much input if it even helps for improvement. I noticed that you don't have that many poems on your DA but if this is your first, then you have a gift for it. You should write some more whenever you feel like it. I would keep you on my watch if I knew how to do it, lol. So I'll just do it the old fashioned way; check up from time to time. Meanwhile, I hope you do the same. It feels good when someone favs and comments on your prose or art not because of popularity (hate the hell out of it) but because you find others I guess you can relate to through insight and actually care. So again no problem and I hope we talk again.
:iconone-regret-103:
^^ That's cool. You really think I have a gift for poetry? I've never really thought about it, and if I have, I never thought I was really any good. Thats so kind of you!

I'll definately check up on you, you have some great works, and your really talented! Ditto to the popularity thing too, it really bugs me too.

I hope we talk again also, I can relate to you :)

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It's always the quiet ones you should worry about...
:iconleviathan57:
Since you've been really nice to me I think I should return the favor. I enjoyed the poem and it means a lot to me. Some people can act so desperate or hedonistic for attention that everything someone else does affects them in a powerful way. And I found it interesting that in the end you wrote about how this obsession for attention can kill. Very deep and yet the message is portrayed clearly. (applause)
:iconone-regret-103:
Thank you! Nobody seemed to get that part, and I wasn't about to spell it out for them. I'm glad you liked it, that means a lot. Thanks!

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It's always the quiet ones you should worry about...

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